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I Think About You

When you take away my luxuries When you take away my phone When I’m sitting here by myself With nothing all alone I think about you I really think about you I hate what weve had to go through I still don’t understand I want to say a lot to you But I don’t think that I can As every time I try you turn into someone else Or maybe this is you now but I’m worried for your health Whether you find new love or stay by yourself Know that I tried with you because I think about you I think about you By Rosie Hill

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Date: 1/24/2019 11:07:00 AM
Hi Rosie~ I can relate to your poem all too well! It's well crafted, too. Like you I am new to the site, very new With only two poems posted so far with more ready to post. Poetry is a binding of our souls. Thank you for sharing your soul with us. Best wishes, Panagiota Romios
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Rosie Hill
Date: 1/24/2019 4:37:00 PM
I’m so glad I’m not the only one who has felt this way. Thanks so much! I’ll go check yours poems out. Welcome, hope you enjoy mine and the ones I hope to write in the future. And you, I can tell you have a great soul- here’s to poetry and a new friend x
Date: 1/17/2019 1:29:00 PM
Hello Rosie Hill, Hello again my friend. This person sounds like she is hard to talk to. Two people in a relationship need to talk things out. Not argue. have a nice day my friend.
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Rosie Hill
Date: 1/17/2019 1:57:00 PM
I wrote this as almost a love letter to my ex boyfriend. Love your intake on this poem, and you aswell. Xx
Date: 1/11/2019 11:07:00 PM
A self-less poem, well written. Nice read. Thank you for sharing and welcome to PoetrySoup, Rosie.
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Rosie Hill
Date: 1/12/2019 6:52:00 AM
So much love and thanks to you. Hope you enjoy my future poems and that I hear from you soon x

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