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I Think

Faster than the Light
Lighter than the Breezy Wind
Thoughts adorned my Past

Higher than the Sky
Mightier than every High
Thoughts make my Present

Heavier than goals
Unless backed by my efforts
Thoughts spoil the Future


- Shrineetee Kar
31.08.2015
For the Contest " Senryu on Cellular Reality" 
by marvin celestial

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Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 9/17/2015 9:19:00 PM Profound... Wonderful...Food for thought. Warm regards, Bobby Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 9/18/2015 2:35:00 AM Thanks Bobby for sending these wishes my way. Congrats to you too on your win. Regards.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/16/2015 11:15:00 PM Excellent pen Shrineetee! Congrats on ur first place superb win! Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 9/18/2015 2:33:00 AM Thank you Dr. Upma. Congratulations to you too for well deserved win. Regards.

Carrie Richards Date: 9/16/2015 7:47:00 PM Hooray for your win!! Well done Shrineetee! Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 9/18/2015 2:32:00 AM Thanks Carrie. Your take on the subject was very interesting. I really enjoyed reading that. Regards.

Marvin G. Celestial Date: 9/16/2015 7:33:00 PM This is awesome! Congratz! Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 9/18/2015 2:28:00 AM Thanks Marvin. It is a great honour to get this first place win. A nice subject I must say. Thank you once again. Regards.

Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 8/31/2015 8:52:00 AM You think deep and beautifully, thus you exist in the world of poetry, Master of Senryu.Congrat. Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 9/1/2015 12:04:00 AM Thanks for visiting this one. Appreciate the encouraging words.