Shrineetee Kar Poet Senryu

I Think

Faster than the Light
Lighter than the Breezy Wind
Thoughts adorned my Past

Higher than the Sky
Mightier than every High
Thoughts make my Present

Heavier than goals
Unless backed by my efforts
Thoughts spoil the Future


- Shrineetee Kar
31.08.2015
For the Contest " Senryu on Cellular Reality" 
by marvin celestial

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Anindya Mohan Tagore September 17, 2015 at 9:19 PM Profound... Wonderful...Food for thought. Warm regards, Bobby Shrineetee Kar September 18, 2015 at 2:35 AM Thanks Bobby for sending these wishes my way. Congrats to you too on your win. Regards.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:15 PM Excellent pen Shrineetee! Congrats on ur first place superb win! Shrineetee Kar September 18, 2015 at 2:33 AM Thank you Dr. Upma. Congratulations to you too for well deserved win. Regards.

Carrie Richards September 16, 2015 at 7:47 PM Hooray for your win!! Well done Shrineetee! Shrineetee Kar September 18, 2015 at 2:32 AM Thanks Carrie. Your take on the subject was very interesting. I really enjoyed reading that. Regards.

Marvin G. Celestial September 16, 2015 at 7:33 PM This is awesome! Congratz! Shrineetee Kar September 18, 2015 at 2:28 AM Thanks Marvin. It is a great honour to get this first place win. A nice subject I must say. Thank you once again. Regards.

Ovidiu Bocsa August 31, 2015 at 8:52 AM You think deep and beautifully, thus you exist in the world of poetry, Master of Senryu.Congrat. Shrineetee Kar September 1, 2015 at 12:04 AM Thanks for visiting this one. Appreciate the encouraging words.