I Think

Faster than the Light Lighter than the Breezy Wind Thoughts adorned my Past Higher than the Sky Mightier than every High Thoughts make my Present Heavier than goals Unless backed by my efforts Thoughts spoil the Future - Shrineetee Kar 31.08.2015 For the Contest " Senryu on Cellular Reality" by marvin celestial

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Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 9/17/2015 9:19:00 PM

Profound... Wonderful...Food for thought. Warm regards, Bobby

Shrineetee Kar
Date: 9/18/2015 2:35:00 AM

Thanks Bobby for sending these wishes my way. Congrats to you too on your win. Regards.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/16/2015 11:15:00 PM

Excellent pen Shrineetee! Congrats on ur first place superb win!

Shrineetee Kar
Date: 9/18/2015 2:33:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma. Congratulations to you too for well deserved win. Regards.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/16/2015 7:47:00 PM

Hooray for your win!! Well done Shrineetee!

Shrineetee Kar
Date: 9/18/2015 2:32:00 AM

Thanks Carrie. Your take on the subject was very interesting. I really enjoyed reading that. Regards.

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 9/16/2015 7:33:00 PM

This is awesome! Congratz!

Shrineetee Kar
Date: 9/18/2015 2:28:00 AM

Thanks Marvin. It is a great honour to get this first place win. A nice subject I must say. Thank you once again. Regards.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/31/2015 8:52:00 AM

You think deep and beautifully, thus you exist in the world of poetry, Master of Senryu.Congrat.

Shrineetee Kar
Date: 9/1/2015 12:04:00 AM

Thanks for visiting this one. Appreciate the encouraging words.