Probir Gupta Poet Rhyme

I T Was One of Those Mornings

Seismic waves shook the ground under our feet
On that passionate morning we could not meet
         Little did I understand then
         I would soon be crestfallen
Completely a lonely soul in the meaningless street
Beaten broken bewildered battered and bereaved


The other day when you poured me pink and warm
Passion pulsar profuse in grace and exquisite charm
           From your purple front door
           To my restless slight shore
My tree was in dance as its leaves you gently stirred
The south wind was back together with its pretty bird
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March 9, 2016

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Eve Roper March 25, 2016 at 8:38 PM Wonderful write again, Probir! Congratulations on your win! Probir Gupta March 25, 2016 at 11:13 PM Thank you Eve...

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2016 at 9:18 AM Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..I am sure that living through a very bad earth quake would be one of the worst days ever..We had a very small earthquake here a few years back but nothing to compare to what I see on TV.. Probir Gupta March 24, 2016 at 10:30 AM Thank you.... My poems are not necessarily my personal experience.... Only about eight months ago, we who live in Kolkata, had been in a shock of earthquake of about Richter 5to6..... Life gives us both good and bad days, whether we are moneyed people or beggars.... As humble poets I am sensitive to certain perceptions that seek expression...

Teddy Kimathi March 24, 2016 at 8:43 AM Hi Probir. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-) Probir Gupta March 24, 2016 at 10:31 AM Thank you Teddy...

Vladislav Raven March 23, 2016 at 10:31 PM Hi Probir, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your emotions are always strong my friend. You always seem to write with a simplistic gentleness and it does put across your vision so well. This one goes into my faves Probir....Vlad. Probir Gupta March 24, 2016 at 3:16 AM Thank you Vlad...

Susan Gentry March 23, 2016 at 3:59 PM Congratulations on your placement in this contest! Great imagery. 1st verse so sad. Probir Gupta March 23, 2016 at 7:53 PM Thank you Susan...

Timothy Hicks March 9, 2016 at 7:45 PM A morning of tragedy ... and a morning of passion. You expressed yourself really beautifully here. The connection between the tree and the bird was a nice touch, I thought ... well done, Probir. I enjoyed your poem collage. Probir Gupta March 10, 2016 at 4:50 AM Thank you Timothy...

Connie Marcum Wong March 9, 2016 at 4:51 PM I love the way you express passion in your poetry Probir. Excellent! #7 Probir Gupta March 10, 2016 at 4:51 AM Thank you Connie...

Nette Onclaud March 9, 2016 at 7:42 AM a descriptive fine work you have here, probir!.. namaste and huggs Probir Gupta March 9, 2016 at 9:54 AM Thank you...