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I t Was One of Those Mornings

Seismic waves shook the ground under our feet On that passionate morning we could not meet Little did I understand then I would soon be crestfallen Completely a lonely soul in the meaningless street Beaten broken bewildered battered and bereaved The other day when you poured me pink and warm Passion pulsar profuse in grace and exquisite charm From your purple front door To my restless slight shore My tree was in dance as its leaves you gently stirred The south wind was back together with its pretty bird ________________________________________________ March 9, 2016

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Date: 3/25/2016 8:38:00 PM
Wonderful write again, Probir! Congratulations on your win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/25/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 3/24/2016 9:18:00 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..I am sure that living through a very bad earth quake would be one of the worst days ever..We had a very small earthquake here a few years back but nothing to compare to what I see on TV..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/24/2016 10:30:00 AM
Thank you.... My poems are not necessarily my personal experience.... Only about eight months ago, we who live in Kolkata, had been in a shock of earthquake of about Richter 5to6..... Life gives us both good and bad days, whether we are moneyed people or beggars.... As humble poets I am sensitive to certain perceptions that seek expression...
Date: 3/24/2016 8:43:00 AM
Hi Probir. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/24/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Teddy...
Date: 3/23/2016 10:31:00 PM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your emotions are always strong my friend. You always seem to write with a simplistic gentleness and it does put across your vision so well. This one goes into my faves Probir....Vlad.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/24/2016 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Vlad...
Date: 3/23/2016 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest! Great imagery. 1st verse so sad.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/23/2016 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Susan...
Date: 3/9/2016 7:45:00 PM
A morning of tragedy ... and a morning of passion. You expressed yourself really beautifully here. The connection between the tree and the bird was a nice touch, I thought ... well done, Probir. I enjoyed your poem collage.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/10/2016 4:50:00 AM
Thank you Timothy...
Date: 3/9/2016 4:51:00 PM
I love the way you express passion in your poetry Probir. Excellent! #7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/10/2016 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 3/9/2016 7:42:00 AM
a descriptive fine work you have here, probir!.. namaste and huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/9/2016 9:54:00 AM
Thank you...