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I Swear It..

He never knew a thing about it besides the shoe pack. In that Box!?!? Faculty, Cutlery pom pom in a green. Open can of tomatoes. Not THE can. *Lick* Mmm. Blueberry vacuum cleaner. Feather! Feather could be a salute. Like to a tyrant? Yeah, like Hitler Hush, Hush, don't say that. I wouldn't, could you? I couldn't, but would.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/12/2009 10:33:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Gerko. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2009 7:52:00 AM
Slick, clever wording-that makes the reader just say,hmmm! Then WE read it again, because it's fun to read work this thought-provoking. Like a puzzle, you want resolution, but it's alot of fun while you figuring it out! Great word play!!
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