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I Swear

For you, Gran- I love you! I swear.. I saw you come in last night, You breezed, with ease through the midnight sky. You were quick & beautiful But you caught my eye. I swear.. I heard you come in last night, You whispered in my ear. You tried to be quiet, quick, But I knew, I heard you here. I swear.. I felt you come in last night, Wrap your arms around my waist. You stood over me & comforted me After another day that went unfaced. I swear.. I felt you close last night, Although we’re stars and moons apart. Ever since that night you left us, I always feel you in my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/10/2010 1:36:00 AM
awesome tribute Rachel :) WN
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:23:00 PM
This is so sweet, I am sure she would be proud of this- More Smiles
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Date: 4/14/2010 9:39:00 AM
Touchy in a very sentimental, nice one enjoyed
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:59:00 AM
beautifully done tribute
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:24:00 AM
Rachel, great write in tribute to your grandmother..I can feel her love for you and your love for her...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:05:00 AM
very sweet poem--enjoyed
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Date: 4/13/2010 9:32:00 PM
A fine tribute
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