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I Submit My Kiss To You

When you came into my life you capture my soul and when we embraced I felt a weakness though out my whole body, our compassion is like no other.The feeling of our first kiss were as, if the ground were shaking from a thousand chariots racing when your lips touched mine for the very first time my mind stopped and my body shock as if we were both in a earth quake, the compassion we had from just that one kiss is UN-describable how can anyone describe something that was so beautiful for the first time, it is truly UN-describable and unforgettable.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/1/2018 12:21:00 PM
Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper.
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Bobby May
Date: 12/1/2018 2:30:00 PM
Thank you Funom! Have a great holiday and keep peace in your heart my friend!
Date: 12/1/2018 5:06:00 AM
How very romantic dear Bobby, I enjoyed reading your tender poem, This Sunday is comment day, I hope you join us in comment to others as this is a kindness we all strive for in this site, thank you for sharing, have a blessed day.
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Bobby May
Date: 12/1/2018 5:51:00 AM
I comment every day but I did not know what you say about today so, I will comment twice today! Thank You Pixie!

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