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I Still Cant Feel You On My Wings As We Fly

I’m empty inside when you’re next to me I feel alone even though you’re chasing me I hear your voice but there’s no one around I’m in your presence but I don’t hear a sound There’s no one here but you and I Why can’t I feel you on my wings as we fly Got your love trapped and it wont get out But there’s no evidence of you here beyond the shadow of a doubt Even though your close you’re a million miles away Tomorrow is forever but you live in yesterday I want to see you how hard I try But why can’t I feel you on my wings as we fly Back to back or eye to eye I still can’t feel you or see you and I don’t know why You follow my steps but I see no track I carry you everywhere but there’s nothing on my back Are you alive or did you die I still can’t feel you on my wings as we fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2011 11:14:00 AM
This is awesome-hidden between the lines is one great love story, right? Really liked this poem and will read others soon. Best to you. Hope u moved on if this is personal. Heavy duty lines here. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:35:00 AM
Kevin this is a wonderful expression of emotion.. hope u entered it in the Cheatin' Song contest by Paula .. this is so tenderly written luv.. many scenes played like this one unfortunately.. I luv the expression of the wings as u fly ..
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:58:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kevin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:40:00 PM
good poem, i know how this feels, or they stick to your own wings when it is nothing but based on lies and dishonesty...
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:31:00 PM
Wow great song! Now all you need is some music! Light & Love
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