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I Smile and Frown When

I smile when- Woman has strange men over You laugh and mind business Married to your ******* neighbor I frown when- Man wants medicine for kid, Clinic shut down, Alcohol delivered a government payout

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/20/2012 2:00:00 PM

Sharon, find myself looking deep into this poem and shivering....you really created something special here! please if ok with you I would like to print this and push-pin on my poetry board @ home...of these moments, on both sides, I understand...faving you & this remarkable art! I like the way you abbreviate thought on line 3...lets the reader fly....then twist large line 4...like I said, this is cool! jimbo

Lynn Dolly
Date: 9/20/2012 4:08:00 PM

:) Of course! It's very flattering that you would like to put my write on your board!:))*Smiles and wink* Thanks, I'm glad you like it!