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I Sit Quietly and Stare

Tell me exactly why you left. Did you think I wouldn’t care? I’ve been beat up and bereft, as I sit quietly and stare. I painted pictures of our romance, and you ripped them to shreds. You’re a tainted permanent fixture, I tripped and fell on my head. Where was I when our summer fling dried up and withered? Your care was back then, a runner sings lies without trust delivered. Forgive me for wondering, but was another woman on your mind? I don’t live free, pondering, was your lover an easy girl to find? Trust has been broken and our book closed its final chapter, Lust has been spoken and I’m decomposed, you’re the primal extractor. No remorse was shown and your goodbye was only insinuated, I reinforce I’m alone and you fly so high as I sit quietly intimidated. I’ve been beat up and bereft, as I sit quietly and stare, tell me exactly why you left, did you think I wouldn’t care? Date Written: May 19, 2016
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Lamoureux Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Well expressed, I also wanted to say thanks for choosing my entry in your contest.
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:41 PM
SOUP MAIL, dear lou.. important!.. huggs
Devnath  Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Excellent poem in contest my lovely friend. Very heart touching poem beautifully crafted. A nice 7 i feel. Loved always, bl
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 12:22 PM
ohh, heartbreaking with beautiful, pondering lines, lou... much delighted!..huggs
Raynes Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 9:23 PM
sad poem Laura, frustrating. well written
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