Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

I Share My Soul

A pair of mourning doves preen and prim
snuggled close on their favorite limb.
And cooing low, wake a sleeping sun,
giving praise for a new day begun.

A slip of a ghostly moon rides low,
wearing its light like a pale halo.
And Sol ascends, master of the day,
lighting Dawn with His brilliant display.

Vapors shed crystal tears on the grass,
depositing dewdrops clear as glass.
And blooming flowers imbue the air
with a sweet fragrance, beyond compare.

Tall, lanky palms of feathery leaf
are clad in a green southern motif.
And skittish crabs play tag with the waves,
darting in and out of flooded caves.

Sipping wine while enjoying the show,
we greet the day with a gentle glow.
And as romance and nature combine,
I share my soul with my Valentine.

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Terry Griffiths February 15, 2026 at 11:12 AM Lovely rhyming verses of four. I really like that each verse is a pair of rhyming couplets. For me, this shows that both people in a couple are their own couplet, rather than half of one. I also love the involvement of nature and the freshness from the beginning.

Connie Marcum Wong February 11, 2022 at 11:30 PM I really love this outstanding love poem the is enhanced with nature’s beauty Emile. Simply enchanting! Congratulations on your wonderful win. I wish you and yours a very happy Valentine’s Day. Blessings xxoo Emile Pinet February 12, 2022 at 8:04 AM Thanks, Connie, happy Valentine's Day my friend, Emile.

Bj Legros Kelley February 9, 2022 at 1:05 AM Emile, congratulations on your high placing win, and thank you for submitting your poem to this contest! I hope you and your beloved have a beautiful and happy Valentine's Day! ~BJ Emile Pinet February 9, 2022 at 8:21 AM Thanks, BJ, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

John Watt October 30, 2020 at 3:03 PM Emile, I too, welcome you to the world of lifetime membership. It is comforting to know that poets of your talent are making the commitment for the long run. This is a gorgeous poetic symphony of flora, fauna, and celestial glory depicted in a style you are so talented in. I particularly enjoyed the rich originality in "Vapors shed crystal tears on the grass / depositing dewdrops clear as glass." I so appreciated your warm comment today. Thank you for all you do in, and for, Poetry Soup ~ John Emile Pinet October 31, 2020 at 7:32 AM Thanks so much John, I appreciate your comments and your talent, but most of all I appreciate that you write from the heart showing us a glimpse of your soul and I like what I'm seeing my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier May 25, 2018 at 8:21 PM Lovely, Emile. Emile Pinet May 26, 2018 at 8:49 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong February 4, 2018 at 5:11 PM This is so lovely Emile. I am not sure if you have posted it at PFT? If not, please post it for our members to enjoy. I am faving it! : ) Emile Pinet February 4, 2018 at 8:04 PM Thanks Connie, I will post it.

Sandra Haight November 1, 2015 at 3:07 PM Back to congratulate you on your fine win, Emile! Sandra Emile Pinet November 1, 2015 at 4:15 PM Thanks Sandra, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.

Skat A October 30, 2015 at 6:01 PM Emile, Congrats on your romantic win. LUV **SKAT** Emile Pinet October 31, 2015 at 9:29 AM Thanks SKAT, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Neva Romaine October 27, 2015 at 2:06 PM Hey Emile, a hearty congratulations on your win in the contest! Such a sweet tribute to not only love but to the beauty and splendor of Nature. Excellent writing and a well deserved winning placement. Be Blessed, Neva Emile Pinet October 27, 2015 at 4:15 PM Thank you Neva, your words bring a smile to my lips. Emile.

Dan Cwiak October 26, 2015 at 10:31 PM Congrats to you Emile, as this is perfect for a Valentine love poem. Keep sipping that wine! Emile Pinet October 27, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thanks Dan, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2015 at 9:25 PM Emile, Congratulations on your sweet Romantic win. I had a lovely time reading every poem. Stop by my latest blog "Because of you" if you'd like or have time. LOVE LINDA Emile Pinet October 27, 2015 at 9:59 AM Thanks so much Linda, I appreciate the oppertunity and the win. I will check out your blog, thanks for the invite. Emile.

Michael Tor October 26, 2015 at 9:19 PM Emile congratulations my friend on this terrific win!!!!!!! Emile Pinet October 27, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thanks Michael, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis March 5, 2015 at 2:33 PM What vivid scenes. wonderful rhyme scheme. A moment to treasure. Emile Pinet March 5, 2015 at 4:19 PM Thanks Iris, I truly appreciate it. Emile.

Marian Baker January 28, 2015 at 4:51 PM That is a wonderful valentine day poem! I will read more of yours I promise. Emile Pinet January 28, 2015 at 5:03 PM Thanks Marian, you bring me a smile. Emile.

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2015 at 1:09 PM Ahh!!!Enjoyed reading this romantic work..I am glad that I chose it to read today.. Thanks for stopping by. Sara Emile Pinet January 23, 2015 at 1:31 PM Thanks Sara, you bring a smile to my lips. Emile.

David Meade January 22, 2015 at 11:08 PM Soul love . . . it's a powerful force of nature that sings and dances! Outstanding my dear friend. Emile Pinet January 23, 2015 at 7:58 AM Thanks David, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong January 22, 2015 at 9:35 PM A beautiful and romantic scene you have set for us Emile. Congratulations on having it chosen for Poem of the day. Most deserving! A lovely Valentine! Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 10:12 PM Thanks Connie, I appreciate your words of encouragement. Emile.

Leon Enriquez January 22, 2015 at 8:59 PM Dear Emile: Nicely done this poetic vision. Congratulations for the POTD. Leon Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 10:13 PM Thank you Leon , for your support. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 22, 2015 at 8:05 PM Emile, 3rd and 4th stanzas are among my faves.. :) what a wonderful scene you pictured here.. :)! sweet with the combination of natures magical wonders wow.. ! congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day.! God bless you.. :) --------olive eloisa Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 10:14 PM Thanks Olive, your words warm my heart. Emile.

Sandra Haight January 22, 2015 at 7:43 PM Emile, I just saw your poem tonight being featured as POTD! Congratulations! You have painted a most beautiful picture with your words! I enjoyed your poem very much. Sandra Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 7:51 PM Thanks Sandra, you make me smile. Emile.

James Horn January 22, 2015 at 4:59 PM Another one of my kind of rhyming poems. So where are tee crabs at. We have quite a few here in SE North Carolina. Jim Horn Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 6:47 PM Thanks James, I appreciate your dropping by. Emile

Gary Bateman January 22, 2015 at 4:17 PM Emile, A truly superb write in every respect and most deserving of Poem of the Day. (I didn't get a chance to read it until know -- but it's a 7 and Fav from me for sure.) Congratulations!! Best Wishes, Gary Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 6:48 PM Thanks Gary, for your warm words of encouragement. Emile.

Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2015 at 2:08 PM This is a wonderful choice for poem of the day! Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 2:45 PM Thanks Richard, I appreciate the support. Emile.

Jean Omalley Polatnick January 22, 2015 at 1:18 PM Beautifully written and totally enjoyed ... a fave! Congrats on POTD!! Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 2:44 PM Thank you Jean, you make me smile. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 22, 2015 at 12:13 PM - A beautiful love picture,Emile - Congratulations on the title P.O.T.D. !!! - // Anne-Lise :) Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 2:43 PM Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your kind thoughts. Emile.

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