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I Sense a Yearning

I sense a yearning in your body a trembling through thirst poised dry immersed in thought of rocks that lie afar jagged and dramatic sharp and dark and wet their outlines lost in the haze of waves in the spray of the sea as it rises and crashes in futile rage you fancy for the stone is strong and will not crack but I know it crumbles I know you dream of standing upon islands your eyes sparkling with defiance and I see further into your secret fear of the goddess who lives within the water your terror of she who foams and hisses like a serpent so devious and inconstant and so you strain perpetually to perceive places you will not venture noble places you are certain to so resist the malice of the tide while I swim I swim in darkness deep and you say I am a conspirator but I have touched the distant crags I have faced these dreams and found them barren found them cold yet you will not listen to my stories for you insist my soul has been infected with the deceit of the sea so you pity me my weakness and forgive me my infirmity

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Date: 5/26/2010 9:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Christopher. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2010 3:20:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:47:00 AM
OKAY I AM DONE WITH THE FLOW OF YOUR POEM, FREE VERSE STYLE. LOVE IT, GOT SUCKED IN TO THE NONE STOP READ WITH ALL THE FLOWING WORDS, ENJOYED,,SKAT
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