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I See You

I see you in  fresh white snow In the morning dew In an ocean blue On a mountain top In an eagles flight Your brothers eyes And his little cries I feel you in  The softness of  Your sisters skin My heart within I hear you when My heart beats fast A choir sings A school bell rings My mind keeps you Tucked away In a secret place Your little face I see sometimes As I drift off Me holding you As I would do If you were here And I could be A father to  Not two, but three

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2010 6:59:00 PM
i havent lost a child but i know what it feels like to lose a loved one. i lost my only sibling, matthew last year and it still dont seem like he can be gone. he was only 40. im so sorry to hear of your loss your soup friend jodie
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:04:00 AM
Know the feelings of a lost child, this one touched my heart. Not an easy thing to do. Excellent write gave it the highest rating I could.
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