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I See You

I look at you I see you shine and I fall in love all over it happens every time you open my eyes to the wonders you keep a place in your heart room made for me in the shadow of the mountains where the saguaro stand tall you are here with me and we're loving it all in the light of the moon by the sea's whispering tide you are here with me the best part of my life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 8:55:00 AM
saguaro is a cactus...thanks for reading and commenting...JB
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Date: 2/5/2010 8:41:00 AM
Another great write..I'll have to look up saguaro though :) Keep the pen flowing...TAH
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