I See You

I look at you
I see you shine
and I fall in love all over
it happens every time

you open my eyes
to the wonders you keep
a place in your heart
room made for me

in the shadow of the mountains
where the saguaro stand tall
you are here with me
and we're loving it all

in the light of the moon
by the sea's whispering tide
you are here with me
the best part of my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 5, 2010 at 8:55 AM
saguaro is a cactus...thanks for reading and commenting...JB
Hill Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 8:41 AM
Another great write..I'll have to look up saguaro though :) Keep the pen flowing...TAH
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