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I See Love

I SEE LOVE

I see God’s love to
mankind with His majestic,
innate creations

moon
m a g n i f i e s
mystique
 
stars
s p a r k l e
sky 

sun
s h i m m e r s
sea

sea
s c a t t e r s
seashells

sanderlings
s c a n
seashore

wind
w h i r l s
weeds

breeze
b l o w s 
bush 

butterflies
b o a s t
beauty

I see love around
in people admiring and
praising God’s wonders.

Copyright © Marilene Evans | Year Posted 2021

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Mohamed Omar Date: 8/17/2021 2:02:00 AM Your magical use of words hold me captive for I don't know how long . All my words fall short to appreciate such a creativity . .......... here I stand looking at you Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 8/17/2021 8:59:00 AM Oh, my goodness... You're so kind and so sweet. Thank you. Thank you. There is no magic, no creativity for they are words, so true, pure, right and lovely... Have a good day.

JCB Brul Date: 8/9/2021 4:39:00 PM What a superb flow!! I enjoyed reading from beginning to end! A fav for me! Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 8/9/2021 7:21:00 PM Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed reading the poem. Have a nice evening.

Nancy Kaufman Date: 8/9/2021 2:45:00 PM very well crafted and outstanding alliteration thru out. congratulations Nancy Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 8/9/2021 4:02:00 PM Thanks so much, Nancy. Have a great evening.

Line Gauthier Date: 8/9/2021 10:49:00 AM what a beautiful sequence ~ well crafted ~ bravo Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 8/9/2021 11:41:00 AM Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

Kim Merryman Date: 8/5/2021 12:24:00 PM Marilene, this is fantastic! I love how you did your Brevette sequence! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 8/5/2021 12:53:00 PM Thanks, Kim. There's so much beauty around us reminding us His creations. Have a Blessed day.

Brian Strand Date: 8/3/2021 3:01:00 PM Marilene ,my prize winner + in contest 1020 Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 8/3/2021 3:12:00 PM Thank you for my placement, Brian.

Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2021 11:16:00 AM wow such superb imagery and the alliteration is simply sensational! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/25/2021 12:30:00 PM Thank you. Thank you, Jan. Appreciate it. Hugs, Marilene.

Sam Kauffman Date: 7/25/2021 9:18:00 AM Beautiful song of praise Marilene! Watching people praise God for this beauty is truly inspiring. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of wind and waves - seashore and butterflies in metamorphosis of our view of the world. Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/25/2021 12:29:00 PM Yes, I always hear in still voice to rejoice in simple things and not to be swayed idolizing material and vain things that envelope today's perspective of life - materialism and obsession of vanity. Have a blessed Sunday, Sam.

Carol Mitra Date: 7/25/2021 12:09:00 AM Amazing write....Congrats on your win Marilene :) Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/25/2021 12:14:00 AM Thanks so much, Carol. Have a nice week-end.

Beryl Edmonds Date: 7/24/2021 11:33:00 PM I see love running through every word of this beautiful creative work of art Marilene. Congratulations on a well deserved win… Belle Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/25/2021 12:13:00 AM Thank you. Thank you, Belle. Have a great week-end.

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/24/2021 6:17:00 PM Revisiting to congratulate you. Love the content and the brilliant way you have presented your thoughts. Love ~ Mala Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/24/2021 6:29:00 PM Thanks so much, Mala.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/24/2021 2:39:00 PM Exquisitely done dear poet, congrats Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/24/2021 4:42:00 PM Thank you for my placement and the compliment. Have a great evening.

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 7/22/2021 7:29:00 PM Superb, innovative, well done. Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/22/2021 8:32:00 PM Thanks so much, Rama! Have a great day.

JCB Brul Date: 7/21/2021 12:57:00 AM What a superb composition. I love the way you weave alliteration in each stanza. A fav for me..Best luck for the win! Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/21/2021 8:52:00 AM Thank you, thank you. Have a nice day.

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/20/2021 2:15:00 PM So beautiful, Marilene - Love the way you have presented your thoughts. Each and every stanza is stunning! BW ~ Mala Login to Reply Marilene Evans Date: 7/20/2021 2:20:00 PM Thanks so much, Mala. Have a great day.