Notes About The Poem

I See It Now

The shiver
In the mirror
Is my gaze

Canvas contorted ~
Life view distorted

Though the end of days ~
I mend not my ways

22-July-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 11:03 AM
May the lion lie down with the cat, just as the lion is to lie down with the lamb!
Seeker Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 6:39 PM
when the veil drops away …
Buhagiar Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 1:52 AM
One has his choices. So long as they are good, make the best of it.
Poetry Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 10:50 PM
poetically speaking, of course salute alkas
Poetry Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 10:21 PM
My dear poet, colleague, it feels like the end, but it's not... At the end of this life even distorted life new beginning we will have, beautiful short poem. salute alkas
Seeker Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 1:48 AM
Metaphorical …
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