I See It Now

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The shiver In the mirror Is my gaze Canvas contorted ~ Life view distorted Though the end of days ~ I mend not my ways 22-July-2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/22/2022 11:03:00 AM

May the lion lie down with the cat, just as the lion is to lie down with the lamb!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/22/2022 6:39:00 PM

when the veil drops away …

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/22/2022 1:52:00 AM

One has his choices. So long as they are good, make the best of it.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 7/21/2022 10:50:00 PM

poetically speaking, of course salute alkas

Alkas Poetry

Date: 7/21/2022 10:21:00 PM

My dear poet, colleague, it feels like the end, but it's not... At the end of this life even distorted life new beginning we will have, beautiful short poem. salute alkas

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/22/2022 1:48:00 AM

Metaphorical …