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I See Fire

Long Day at work He returns as a red-eyed wolf Quiet room and shiny desks His minds keep busy Eyes staring on wet pavements No more Fire Then I See You crow's feet landing on my eyes Fired Up! Messages conveyed even a thick glass cannot stop your anger There is Fire in all working people They all need a spark plug --------------------- Created 12th May 2014 For Poem Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Date: 1/13/2016 7:24:00 PM
Powerful piece of writing I must say
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Date: 9/6/2014 8:00:00 PM
Excellent write! This is great stuff! Thoroughly enjoyed your work! Pandita
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Date: 7/3/2014 7:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, thats lovely :) I love ourfamouspoets.com
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:47:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/18/2014 4:51:00 AM
deep write Lily and great pen congrats on win hugs
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:09:00 AM
I'm pleasantly surprised too! Thanks Shadow for reading this ;)
Date: 5/17/2014 4:32:00 PM
Great set of senryu, Lily, especially the4th and 6th. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Paul for reading and commenting ;)
Date: 5/17/2014 5:02:00 AM
Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Lily
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram for reading and commenting ;)
Date: 5/16/2014 1:58:00 AM
Great masterpiece Lily ! Loved the ending the most ! Congrats on huge win !
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Dr.Upma for reading and commenting ;)
Date: 5/16/2014 12:12:00 AM
Hi Lily, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Linda for the opportunity to write in your contest! I'm trying to familiarize myself with this website ;) I enjoyed writing in contests.
Date: 5/15/2014 9:06:00 AM
Lily... wow I love the ending ... great poetry.... plus Then I See You crow's feet landing on my eyes Fired Up! awesome lines... a true artist you are hugs Brooke
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Brooke for your very encouraging words ;) writing is cathartic for me... Lol