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I See Fire

Long Day at work He returns as a red-eyed wolf Quiet room and shiny desks His minds keep busy Eyes staring on wet pavements No more Fire Then I See You crow's feet landing on my eyes Fired Up! Messages conveyed even a thick glass cannot stop your anger There is Fire in all working people They all need a spark plug --------------------- Created 12th May 2014 For Poem Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/13/2016 7:24:00 PM

Powerful piece of writing I must say

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 8:00:00 PM

Excellent write! This is great stuff! Thoroughly enjoyed your work! Pandita

Active Reader

Date: 7/3/2014 7:28:00 AM

Thank you very much, thats lovely :) I love ourfamouspoets.com

Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thank you

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/18/2014 4:51:00 AM

deep write Lily and great pen congrats on win hugs

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:09:00 AM

I'm pleasantly surprised too! Thanks Shadow for reading this ;)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/17/2014 4:32:00 PM

Great set of senryu, Lily, especially the4th and 6th. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Paul for reading and commenting ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2014 5:02:00 AM

Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Lily

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram for reading and commenting ;)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/16/2014 1:58:00 AM

Great masterpiece Lily ! Loved the ending the most ! Congrats on huge win !

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Dr.Upma for reading and commenting ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2014 12:12:00 AM

Hi Lily, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Linda for the opportunity to write in your contest! I'm trying to familiarize myself with this website ;) I enjoyed writing in contests.

Brooke Dylan

Date: 5/15/2014 9:06:00 AM

Lily... wow I love the ending ... great poetry.... plus Then I See You crow's feet landing on my eyes Fired Up! awesome lines... a true artist you are hugs Brooke

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Brooke for your very encouraging words ;) writing is cathartic for me... Lol