Lily Twinkle Poet Senryu

I See Fire

Long Day at work
He returns
as a red-eyed wolf

Quiet room
and shiny desks
His minds keep busy

Eyes staring
on wet pavements
No more Fire

Then I See You
crow's feet landing on my eyes
Fired Up!

Messages conveyed
even a thick glass
cannot stop your anger

There is Fire 
in all working people
They all need a spark plug

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Created 12th May 2014
For Poem Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Liam Mcdaid January 13, 2016 at 7:24 PM Powerful piece of writing I must say

Pandita Sietesantos September 6, 2014 at 8:00 PM Excellent write! This is great stuff! Thoroughly enjoyed your work! Pandita

Active Reader July 3, 2014 at 7:28 AM Thank you very much, thats lovely :) I love ourfamouspoets.com Lily Twinkle July 9, 2014 at 9:47 AM Thank you

Shadow Hamilton May 18, 2014 at 4:51 AM deep write Lily and great pen congrats on win hugs Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:09 AM I'm pleasantly surprised too! Thanks Shadow for reading this ;)

Paul Callus May 17, 2014 at 4:32 PM Great set of senryu, Lily, especially the4th and 6th. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:10 AM Thank you Paul for reading and commenting ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 17, 2014 at 5:02 AM Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Lily Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:10 AM Thank you Dr. Ram for reading and commenting ;)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 16, 2014 at 1:58 AM Great masterpiece Lily ! Loved the ending the most ! Congrats on huge win ! Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:11 AM Thank you Dr.Upma for reading and commenting ;)

Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2014 at 12:12 AM Hi Lily, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:14 AM Thank you Linda for the opportunity to write in your contest! I'm trying to familiarize myself with this website ;) I enjoyed writing in contests.

Brooke Dylan May 15, 2014 at 9:06 AM Lily... wow I love the ending ... great poetry.... plus Then I See You crow's feet landing on my eyes Fired Up! awesome lines... a true artist you are hugs Brooke Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:15 AM Thank you so much Brooke for your very encouraging words ;) writing is cathartic for me... Lol