I See Dots - Lots

Close your eyes, what do you see?
Excuse me!
See with closed eyes
What rubbish, such lies!
But I see Coloured dots dancing around
Changing colour, falling to the ground
Others see them when they rub their eyes
It's Strange but no big surprise
Do you even know why?
An active retina or a lie?
Do your research, do it right
Hopefully you too will see the light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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August 5, 2019 at 2:29 PM
I see dots , but only purple, is that bad ?
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