I Scream

I scream and scream no one Hears a sound I punch and hit the door Has hard has I can But cant seem to break it down I slam and push but can't seem to keep it shut I whisper and silently talk And it seems everyone can hear I wish and pray and Nothing comes true I fight And seems to do no good but I love and love just as I should

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Ali Matheny

Date: 12/6/2008 6:52:00 PM

GREAT POEM!!!!! Love Alexz ^_^

Raven Carr

Date: 12/5/2008 11:27:00 AM

NICE!!!!!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/5/2008 11:26:00 AM

When we are depressed it seems we are transparent to everyone '...and it seems everyone can hear.' Your last line says it all... keep loving; you can't go wrong. God bless, Keith

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/4/2008 12:21:00 PM

There's always a trial or a setback that halts us in our paths of life. In due time that obstacle was a mere preparation for what's to come. Keep your faith in God and rest assured that He delivers. God bless and welcome to poetry soup where you are amongst great company...Raul

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/4/2008 11:50:00 AM

life can somtimes be difficult, but your doing the right thing. I'm proud of you. keep up the good work..........