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I Say There Is No God.

It's already too odd The world is just for us I say there is no god I might not want to nod But I just think I must It's already too odd I don't want a squad Ready to blow a bus I say there is no god The opinions may be broad But it all comes back to cuss It's already too odd There is no need to cod The problems should have rust I say there is no god In truth, it's all so flawed Why do we discuss it's already too odd I say there is no god.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/3/2009 6:09:00 PM
I haven't seen this form before I need to look it up. Very interesting Mr. Nibroc, welcome to soup city.
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Date: 5/3/2009 2:45:00 PM
Very expressive.
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:35:00 AM
well..whatever floats your boat! Like I said to my son about about 7 when he said there was no Santa Claus on Xmas eve; if that's what you want to believe..go ahead and see how life turns out for ya. He believed..for another year.....Light & Love
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Date: 5/3/2009 8:37:00 AM
sometimes it is hard to see the wood for the trees, God is always there sometimes things happen that we don't understand, like wars, famine and so forth, earthquakes, we don't understand everything but God knows and he will reveal everything to us when Jesus returns then we will fully understand everything, I was angry hurt and upset for a very very long time when my mother left home whern I was 11, I understsnd now it just took a long time, anyway God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:04:00 AM
its actually more opposed to the hate and war fate brings than against god. i just used god as an example.
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:00:00 AM
there is a GOD waiting for us to want him even if we reject him,ignore him,not believe in him,he understands our anger and frustrations,there is God and he loves us all,that is my opinion of course,but i have to say this is wonderfully penned my friend---charma
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