I Say I

I have lost the battle with myself ages ago, Ripped petal with petal and whispered 'I love you no more'. I've washed my feet, I've changed belief, The time has come, rise I'll succeed.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/16/2025 11:44:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 1/25/2016 3:54:00 PM

RIZO, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **