I Say Hi With a Smile

I say hi with a smile
All men are selfish, as we only want the most
beautiful girl. As time goes on this story
will tell. As I see so many of these ladies that
are to good to be true, how can a guy like me
get one of them to be my wife, my lover, my
best friend. I heard her laugh inside saying
no way guy you will never be my type. I say hi
with my nicest smile, she didn't even notice
as she knew she was in denial. I even stood
before her to sing. I yelled please just pick
me I already bought your diamond ring. I begged
her to just give me one date. She only looked
at me with even more hate. I said in a 
desperate tone please give me your phone number
so I can always start out your day saying hi
with a smile. She finally gave in after I said
just give me a try I'll give you what you want
all in a smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/3/2011 10:47:00 AM
Eric, this poem does not qualify for the contest you entered it in , which is "one English Quintain" . No other form is accepted for this contest, if you would please remove it I would love it if you would write an English Quintain to submit.
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