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I Saw You Today

I saw you today It was cold and raining too And I was waiting for both of us to say I'm sorry for hurting you

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Ken Jordan

Date: 3/24/2015 10:53:00 PM

I Concur whole heartily! What a wonderful thought. I love this poem, stay strong my friend. Ken

Jerry Bolton

Date: 3/24/2015 12:40:00 PM

Amazingly realistic and stunning is this four-line poem. What a fantastic hought process. Yes!!!

Daver Austin

Date: 3/24/2015 8:41:00 AM

This is so simple and true. Gotta love it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2015 10:54:00 PM

Allison, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2015 9:42:00 PM

Allison, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@