* I Saw You

I saw you shaking afraid
broken bleeding hungry mistrusting I reached out
you let me love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 1, 2010 at 10:51 AM
Hi Rhonda, I know that you love animal so much and give great care. But when I read this beautiful poem, I couldn't help but think of a child, frightened and emotionally alone. It has that much power. Love you. Dane
Guzzi Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Very nice..precise free verse...HUGS!!! Light & Love
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January 19, 2010 at 4:04 PM
And love pours from your giving heart. This is such a nice glimpse of you. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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