I Saw the Bullet

In my spotting scope
I saw a flash
All went black.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gupta Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Very good haiku...
Thornton Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:57 PM
nice haiku!!
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