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I Saw Hurt Speak So Loud

I Saw Hurt Speak So Loud I saw hurt speak so loud, as you stood weak but proud. Your sad eyes told me more, red stains on your front door. I sought to touch your soul, stop the loss and its toll. Win your heart, join to mine, on sweet love we would dine. Hope in each heart and breast, we spoke, love did the rest. From loss, look of ash gray, we held hands, knelt to pray. Spring came, we wed as two, as love's gift was our due. Day brought light and much more, nights spent on safe new shore. Life then gave joy to live, we each sought true to give. Now with our hearts in line, love's depths, each day will shine. 2-07-2018, for SilentOne's 120 words contest

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Date: 3/12/2018 4:06:00 AM
Hi Robert It is so nice and heart-touching write. congratulations for your win
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:55:00 PM
Dang, Robert. That was sweet and sad. Well written. I felt every word.
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Robert, enjoyed reading,, .. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:33:00 PM
A beautifully tender, deep and emotional write Robert. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:11:00 AM
Back to just say congratulations Robert...
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:34:00 AM
A great narrative on how a relationship grows. Perfectly written Robert!
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:59:00 AM
Very touching poem, Robert. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:28:00 AM
Hi Robert, This is such a well written write about a relationship that has stood the test of time. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:03:00 AM
Very deep and very well expressed Robert.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/7/2018 12:32:00 PM
Great entry Robert, so very well done...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/7/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you my friend. "I saw hurt speak so loud, as you stood weak but proud." That first verse came to me and the rest flowed out like rushing waters from a broken dam.

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