I Saw Her Standing There

While sitting in the Park,
I have great lark,
And became cleaner air,
When I saw her standing there.

And all the time without you, 
I feel very very  blue,
Oh, changed world,
When I saw her standing there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 7, 2013 at 3:03 PM
Nick if for the contest an excellent entree...David
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