I saw God

I saw God rob the poor box
take a beggar out to eat

two burgers and a coffee
a loaves and fishes feast.

I saw God in the alley
drape his coat around a bum

watched him walking slowly
on dark streets of lonely numb

saw Him in the playground
share his crackers with a friend.

I saw God on the battlefield
console an orphaned child

saw Him wipe her tears away
replace them with His own.

I saw Him on the subway
rise and let the tired sit.

Saw Him in the canned goods aisle
reach items on high shelves

saw the gratitude in those
who can’t do it for themselves.

I asked God what was going on
said “Hey, God, whassup!”

He smiled and said: “ just watching
my Angels growing up.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 3/19/2024 7:15:00 PM
I like that you display the benevolent, merciful side of God. But he is so much more. A God of truth and justice, wisdom and power. Soon, he will act against those who oppress their fellowman, removing them from the earth. Permanently. Interesting footnote: the captcha is tpw, my initials
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Date: 3/18/2024 7:15:00 PM
Perhaps the best 'religious' poem I've ever read on the Soup, John. Right into my FAVES. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 3/16/2024 5:48:00 PM
Hello John, Your poem is a testament to the presence of divinity in everyday acts of kindness and compassion. You beautifully illustrate how God manifests through the generosity and empathy of ordinary people. Each stanza shows the power of love to transcend boundaries and uplift those in need. I love how your words are a gentle nudge to recognize the divine within ourselves and others. Truly inspiring. - Blessings, Daniek
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Date: 3/16/2024 2:24:00 PM
This is a lively, interesting poem, even if it did take a shot at us short people. (Yes, I do need help with high shelves). An angel wrote this poem for recognizing good works. Thank you.
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Date: 3/16/2024 6:12:00 AM
Hey John, long time no see.. I hope you are well.. Nicely done this one.. we al have God inside us... but there are some who are possibly possessed by demons...
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