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I Saw a Poem Dancing

Nature's up at break of day, revealing beauty around me lay. I see the sunrise flashing through, coloring the hills purple and blue. A squirrel scampers through dew wet grass, a nut in is cheeks as he hurries past. I listen to a far off waterfall, and hear chirping birds sing their mating call. Brown and yellow butterflies delight my ever searching eyes. And wild flowers fragrant and sweet, smell like my Savior, someday I will meet. Now a balmy breeze blows through my hair, and a poem dances in the air. .

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Robert Lindley

Date: 12/21/2015 11:28:00 AM

This poem speaks to me deeply my friend. A wonderful and very inspiring piece it is!A7 ADDING THIS JEWEL TO MY FAV LIST. THANKS

Darlene Gifford
Date: 12/21/2015 2:12:00 PM

Merry Christmas, Robert, and thank you so much for your comments and for the 7 and the save. It always pleases me when one of my poems has a deep affect on others, like this poem has on you. ~~~:)

Robert Nehls

Date: 10/3/2015 4:41:00 AM

Hi Darlene. Yes, sometimes the poem is already there dancing before our eyes. All we need to do is simply write it down and share it with others. That you have done, my friend, and it was a joy to read. May the light of god shine upon you.... Robert.

Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/3/2015 8:43:00 PM

Hi, Robert, Thanks for liking my poem and for your remarks that strike a chord with me. Yes, I agree that many poems are before us constantly in every situation. We just have to be sensitive to the moment and to what it offers. Blessings from Him who enlightens us daily. :) ~~~Darlene

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/4/2015 3:07:00 PM

A eautiful write... simple... elegent and a delight to read.

Darlene Gifford
Date: 9/4/2015 8:35:00 PM

Your comments are very much appreciated, Carol, Thank you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/4/2015 12:09:00 AM

Love this write Darlene, so simple sweet n smooth!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 9/4/2015 8:17:00 AM

Nature refreshes our soul and revives our spirit when we take the time to appreciate it. Thanks, Dr. Upma for liking my poem. When you take your next nature walk, poems will be waiting for you, also, before your exploring eyes.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 9/3/2015 5:46:00 PM

Fun title and fun poem. I love the happy feel in the poem. Makes me feel like going for a nature walk. And i def love "smell like my Savior, someday I will meet."

Darlene Gifford
Date: 9/3/2015 7:54:00 PM

Thanks, njeri, and yes, please consider going for a nature walk. Don't forget to take your pen and notebook because you also might find a poem there. The scent of our sweet Savior is strong in nature. And His voice is in the singing birds and bubbling brooks, as well as in the wind.