I Saw A Blue Jay

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Animals Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 01/01/2025


 what stunning sight you are,
         beautiful blue jay!
  your wings carry you so far
  you called but couldn't stay;
     sad seeing you fly away.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/21/2025 9:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your Blue Jay write. I have none here but I did at the last place I lived. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/21/2025 10:19:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/2/2025 7:17:00 PM

Nicely penned. Jays are, indeed, a remarkable sight. Cheers, Edward. ~ Gershon

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/2/2025 8:06:00 PM

Thank you very much, Gershon:-)