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I Said Yes

I said Yes Your passionate words took over me and to anything I said yes And the way you made my hair twist and the way you made my toes curl I said yes Or when you held my hand Oh! I do understand I said yes Your positive aura asks me do I want more of…. I said yes Given permission a collaborative composition I said yes Before giving in this was set for me to win I said yes Taking me everywhere Giddy here and there I said yes My whole world is shaken not stirred Giving me all the goods is what I preferred And I said yes

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Date: 8/9/2016 10:47:00 AM
I love this poem....I can truly relate to being so mesmerized that "yes" was always my answer.
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Misty Mccoi
Date: 8/9/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Dawnelle. Mine too lol
Date: 8/8/2016 10:15:00 PM
A wonderful piece creatively spun with whimsy and a lot of fun! I really enjoyed this very clever write. blessings, lynn
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Misty Mccoi
Date: 8/9/2016 8:32:00 AM
Aww thank you Lynn Marie. Peace.

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