I Said Yes

I said Yes

Your passionate words took over me and to anything
I said yes
And the way you made my hair twist and the way you made my toes curl
I said yes
Or when you held my hand
Oh! I do understand
I said yes
Your positive aura asks me do I want more of….
I said yes
Given permission a collaborative composition
I said yes
Before giving in this was set for me to win
I said yes
Taking me everywhere
Giddy here and there
I said yes
My whole world is shaken not stirred
Giving me all the goods is what I preferred
And I said yes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Owens Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 10:47 AM
I love this poem....I can truly relate to being so mesmerized that "yes" was always my answer.
Mccoi Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Thank you Dawnelle. Mine too lol
Marie Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 10:15 PM
A wonderful piece creatively spun with whimsy and a lot of fun! I really enjoyed this very clever write. blessings, lynn
Mccoi Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Aww thank you Lynn Marie. Peace.
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