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I remember the day

I remember the day you broke my heart I got the news I fell apart I tried to stand up but I fell so hard I knew what to do but didn't know where to start. Jessica

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Date: 5/26/2024 6:19:00 PM
Dear Jessica, the heartbreak in your verse is palpable. Very expressive and poignant. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 5/26/2024 6:32:00 PM
It was hard indeed...thank you for your comment dear Susan

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