I remember the day

I remember the day
you broke my heart
I got the news
I fell apart
I tried to stand up
but I fell so hard
I knew what to do
but didn't know where to start.

Jessica
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Dear Jessica, the heartbreak in your verse is palpable. Very expressive and poignant. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Carrasco Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 6:32 PM
It was hard indeed...thank you for your comment dear Susan
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