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i remember love

i remember the dark night sky filled with small orbs of light. i remember a second sun rising in the hushed ashes of the night. i remember the haunting echos of a lonesome a song of beauty. and your voice bouncing with laughter and joy. i remember smell of the climbing, wild ivy. i remember soft gazes at the dancing lake. i remember your hand gently placed in mine, warm and soft. even now that you are not here with me or with any one, i will remember your love, in my heart forever. in this life time, any life time. ( by august about rainbow girl)

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Date: 4/8/2016 2:56:00 AM
nice to see this one again, Amanda. linda
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:38:00 PM
Hi Amanda, this is xool
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Date: 9/2/2014 10:50:00 PM
I sense a cryptic absence. Your talent serves you well and I feel the vacancy in your heart...... Jake
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:03:00 PM
I've been a published author since 12. I'm 36 now and thought that was very well written. Great expression. You have talent. I wouldn't give up on that. Christopher "Ghost" DelOrfano La Familia Entertainment Boston
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:56:00 PM
AMANDA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/26/2014 11:31:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Amanda - I choose your first lovely written poem - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:05:00 PM
Amanda, loved your "I Remember Love" poem! Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 8/25/2014 4:33:00 PM
This is nice, Amanda,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/25/2014 9:36:00 AM
I'm remembering too
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