I Remember

I remember that first day love
came to rest, the pulsing veins 
and beating chest. When senses
flew with angels high, when all
was love before the eye.

When you came and took my
soul, took of me and made me
whole. I remember when desire
was fetched and upon my pores
your fragrance etched.

Those pale blue skies, and the
tenderness that filled your eyes,
how could I forget, or that day
regret.

When lips met and dreams came
true, that wish granted in finding
you. The fulfilment of that kiss,
and left me in a state of bliss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 29, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Thankyou for the comment. I think this is good it makes me think of when I first met my disaster... but this is written very nicely.
Bloomsfield Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Very beautiful!Welcome back,so happy to read you!
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 7:42 PM
Hey, is this for the new love contest. It would be really great for it!! YOu really wrote a great love poem. Very lovely lines! luv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 5:59 PM
Awesome piece Daniel .. lovely expressions in every line of emotion and luv.. can so relate with my own marriage and how my husband and I feel toward one another through your elegant lines my friend.. another classic in your portfolio luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Lovely passionate thoughts of feelings of love, Daniel
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