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I Remember

I remember that first day love came to rest, the pulsing veins and beating chest. When senses flew with angels high, when all was love before the eye. When you came and took my soul, took of me and made me whole. I remember when desire was fetched and upon my pores your fragrance etched. Those pale blue skies, and the tenderness that filled your eyes, how could I forget, or that day regret. When lips met and dreams came true, that wish granted in finding you. The fulfilment of that kiss, and left me in a state of bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 5:59:00 AM
Thankyou for the comment. I think this is good it makes me think of when I first met my disaster... but this is written very nicely.
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Date: 12/20/2010 9:10:00 AM
Very beautiful!Welcome back,so happy to read you!
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Date: 12/19/2010 7:42:00 PM
Hey, is this for the new love contest. It would be really great for it!! YOu really wrote a great love poem. Very lovely lines! luv, andrea
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Date: 12/19/2010 5:59:00 PM
Awesome piece Daniel .. lovely expressions in every line of emotion and luv.. can so relate with my own marriage and how my husband and I feel toward one another through your elegant lines my friend.. another classic in your portfolio luv..
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Date: 12/19/2010 1:30:00 PM
Lovely passionate thoughts of feelings of love, Daniel
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