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I Ran To the Mountains

Beaten and battered I ran to the mountains, I didn’t see pretty scenery or flowing fountains- All I saw was lack of forgiveness without grace, as I remember the look you smeared on your face. Torrential downpours ruined our wedding day, lack of love was probably why I didn’t stay- I’ve raced your horses and ended up in the stable, but completely loving you I was never able. “RUN FAST!”, and never look back mamma told me, I should’ve listened but I wanted to feel free- “Please no more chains!” they leave me constricted, I’ve lived a life so lost and contradicted. Loss is the reason I have never loved deep, pain and sorrow is the reason I never sleep- Promises broken as I close my eyes the last time, the mountains didn’t save me, you were never mine. October 5, 2016

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Date: 10/6/2016 12:17:00 AM
Well, if I were reading you for the first time, I'd be consoling you...only you can write poetry in such a heartfelt manner:) I'm proud to call you my friend:)
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Date: 10/6/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thanks dear Jo, I enjoy writing as if I was in someone else's shoes. My friend is going through a difficult time in her marriage right now. I am trying to help, but it's so hard. I am proud to call you my friend too!!! :)-luloo

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