I Promise!

I promise to be here forever and always
To love and to worship
To give affection and fate
And to build our strong friendship.

I promise to be understanding
when we come to a disagreement
To be sincere and to purpose a herd
of encouragement.

I promise not to hurt you and
be with you consistently
Because you are my dream come true
you are my fantasy.

I promise you my love for now
and forever more, you are
my one and only
The one that I adore.

I promise you my everything
I will be here for eternity
You mean the whole wide world to me,
You are my ecstasy!?

-Amber Dawn Anderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 7, 2016 at 10:26 PM
AMBER, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 28, 2009 at 10:14 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amber. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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December 20, 2009 at 9:27 AM
Nice to see one more Canadian who likes to be poetic! Not a bad poem at all, a little too much chaotic for my taste. I wrote a similar poem but with much more flow, I think you would like to read it.
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December 17, 2009 at 2:53 PM
beautiful words written in pen i enjoyd it!!
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December 17, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Your words are so sincere they make me believe. Welcome to poetry soup, and promise too to write more. I wait to read you again.
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