I Pass This Now To You

Summer evening, patio, warming breeze
Children laughing, oh, the sounds of fun
I’m reminded of what is most important
It is not the day, but when the day is done
The smiles on faces, the sounds of joy
Not so much children, but what they show
Repressing not, their feelings true
Is what we adults should always know

The time we have, so precious, short
Is better spent with joy of heart
Learn from laughter, season’s warmth
Learn from children, what they impart
The day’s importance, is not the day
It’s not the money or stress earned
It’s happiness, a sound filled heart
This I say, for I have learned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Strand Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 11:55 PM
Like the staccato style of this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Jordan Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 3:41 PM
Michael this poem is beautiful and true from the first word to the last - a pleasure to read - thank you for your comments and stay blessed my friend
Winter Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 1:16 PM
The most beautiful sound is that of our children's laughter, don't you think? Yes, you are so right in your message here so beautifully written. Love, Shar
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