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I Owe You

I owe you The seeds of wonder sown into my land The deep well of true feel I'm drawn into The height and breadth of visions that expand The magic of music, a deep world view. You awe me! A book of Truth, its flavours and tempers A brush of colours that sketches and rhymes A radiating flame bursting from embers A sword of thoughts with sweet Nature aligns. I owe you The new Smile, the Spring time, the blazing verve The thrill of the heart, the mine of countless spaces The thirst for verses of instinct and nerve The Muse of genuine Art one embraces. You awe me! Nature, your beloved.. your sanctified creed The love declaration to pen Juliet! God's purest Gift, of verse a devotee The silence of mountains is your asset.

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Date: 3/17/2020 10:13:00 AM
This poem is supreme. It is on a completely different level! I feel that it completes an unknown feeling inside me.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/17/2020 1:16:00 PM
So humbled and touched by your sincere words and praise, HONESTY.. I'm so glad my humble words touched your poetic feel! Thank you so much. Best regards and blessings.
Date: 3/16/2020 11:51:00 AM
Genuine human love and the beauty of Nature inspire most beautiful poetry, Besma...and you avail yourself of them both with an able pen. A pleasure to read! ~ Warm regards & Blessings // paul
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Date: 3/17/2020 1:14:00 PM
A wonderful poetry on my humble poetry! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit and your elevating feedback! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.
Date: 3/9/2020 5:49:00 PM
There's a romantic wisdom in this great poem Poetess. The way you work the words is masterful, i.e., "The mine of countless spaces...." The 3rd stanza is awesome Besma, and a superb Finish with, "The silence of mountains is your asset." A FAV!! J.A.B.
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Date: 3/12/2020 5:37:00 PM
So blessed to have a reader who dives into a work of Art and decrypts its dimensions and possibilities.. thank you so much, Justin for granting me the honour and great delight.. My deepest regards and blessings to you.
Date: 2/4/2020 8:44:00 AM
Lovely... well written. Ann
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Date: 2/7/2020 11:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann for your graceful presence and kind praise.. my warmest regards and blessings.
Date: 1/28/2020 9:52:00 PM
This poem of yours is just too beautiful. The Power of an inspired mind, that flows out in ink, gracing our Souls. You are a true poet here dearest Besma, as I said before and I'll say it again, you live and breathe Poetry. A fave as always sweet freind....Maria Hugs
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/29/2020 1:14:00 AM
So pleased and humbled dearest Maria, connecting with sensitive Hearts and profound souls.. that's my aspiration! I'm so glad to touch your soul with my humble words! My honour and great delight! Thank you heaps for your continuous and highly valued support sweet friend.. blessings to you. Love and hugs.
Date: 1/27/2020 2:24:00 PM
Beautiful dedication to the one you love.. great last stanza..
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Date: 1/29/2020 1:09:00 AM
The purest of Love.. the most sincere of veneration to those who lead us to paths of Light, Beauty and growth.. thank you so much, Silent One for your beautiful feedback and support.. Regards and blessings.
Date: 1/26/2020 7:59:00 AM
You are the poetess of light and love on soup, and this mingled with your boundless creativity and endless imagination blend together to poetically captivate and embrace us all. You are a gem dear soul sister. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/29/2020 1:02:00 AM
You overwhelm me with your love and sincerity dear Jenny! You reward me with your uplifting compliments.. You elate my soul with your beautiful presence! Thank you so much dear soul sister for your great support and encouragement.. blessings to you. Love and hugs.
Date: 1/23/2020 7:14:00 AM
Words of your poem go beyond the ordinary to reveal the beautiful meaning in life and nature. Loved the originality of your approach--the way you delivered your thoughts. I am saving your poem into my faves and I look forward to seeing this honored as poem of the day.
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Date: 1/23/2020 9:28:00 AM
Already I had my POTD honour receiving such a wonderful feedback! Such generosity and genuineness! Dear Vijay, I highly value your great support and I am deeply grateful.. thank you so much for always giving me the honour of reading and commenting on my humble work. My deepest regards and blessings.

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