Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Rhyme

I Owe You

I owe you

The seeds of wonder sown into my land
The deep well of true feel I'm drawn into
The height and breadth of visions that expand
The magic of music, a deep world view.

You awe me!

A book of Truth, its flavours and tempers
A brush of colours that sketches and rhymes
A radiating flame bursting from embers
A sword of thoughts with sweet Nature aligns.

I owe you

The new Smile, the Spring time, the blazing verve
The thrill of the heart, the mine of countless spaces
The thirst for verses of instinct and nerve
The Muse of genuine Art one embraces.

You awe me!

Nature, your beloved.. your sanctified creed
The love declaration to pen Juliet!
God's purest Gift, of verse a devotee
The silence of mountains is your asset.

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Honesty Oimbo March 17, 2020 at 10:13 AM This poem is supreme. It is on a completely different level! I feel that it completes an unknown feeling inside me. Besma Riabi Dziri March 17, 2020 at 1:16 PM So humbled and touched by your sincere words and praise, HONESTY.. I'm so glad my humble words touched your poetic feel! Thank you so much. Best regards and blessings.

Paul Callus March 16, 2020 at 11:51 AM Genuine human love and the beauty of Nature inspire most beautiful poetry, Besma...and you avail yourself of them both with an able pen. A pleasure to read! ~ Warm regards & Blessings // paul Besma Riabi Dziri March 17, 2020 at 1:14 PM A wonderful poetry on my humble poetry! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit and your elevating feedback! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.

Justin Bordner March 9, 2020 at 5:49 PM There's a romantic wisdom in this great poem Poetess. The way you work the words is masterful, i.e., "The mine of countless spaces...." The 3rd stanza is awesome Besma, and a superb Finish with, "The silence of mountains is your asset." A FAV!! J.A.B. Besma Riabi Dziri March 12, 2020 at 5:37 PM So blessed to have a reader who dives into a work of Art and decrypts its dimensions and possibilities.. thank you so much, Justin for granting me the honour and great delight.. My deepest regards and blessings to you.

Ann Foster February 4, 2020 at 8:44 AM Lovely... well written. Ann Besma Riabi Dziri February 7, 2020 at 11:32 AM Thank you so much, Ann for your graceful presence and kind praise.. my warmest regards and blessings.

Maria Williams January 28, 2020 at 9:52 PM This poem of yours is just too beautiful. The Power of an inspired mind, that flows out in ink, gracing our Souls. You are a true poet here dearest Besma, as I said before and I'll say it again, you live and breathe Poetry. A fave as always sweet freind....Maria Hugs Besma Riabi Dziri January 29, 2020 at 1:14 AM So pleased and humbled dearest Maria, connecting with sensitive Hearts and profound souls.. that's my aspiration! I'm so glad to touch your soul with my humble words! My honour and great delight! Thank you heaps for your continuous and highly valued support sweet friend.. blessings to you. Love and hugs.

Silent One January 27, 2020 at 2:24 PM Beautiful dedication to the one you love.. great last stanza.. Besma Riabi Dziri January 29, 2020 at 1:09 AM The purest of Love.. the most sincere of veneration to those who lead us to paths of Light, Beauty and growth.. thank you so much, Silent One for your beautiful feedback and support.. Regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos January 26, 2020 at 7:59 AM You are the poetess of light and love on soup, and this mingled with your boundless creativity and endless imagination blend together to poetically captivate and embrace us all. You are a gem dear soul sister. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri January 29, 2020 at 1:02 AM You overwhelm me with your love and sincerity dear Jenny! You reward me with your uplifting compliments.. You elate my soul with your beautiful presence! Thank you so much dear soul sister for your great support and encouragement.. blessings to you. Love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit January 23, 2020 at 7:14 AM Words of your poem go beyond the ordinary to reveal the beautiful meaning in life and nature. Loved the originality of your approach--the way you delivered your thoughts. I am saving your poem into my faves and I look forward to seeing this honored as poem of the day. Besma Riabi Dziri January 23, 2020 at 9:28 AM Already I had my POTD honour receiving such a wonderful feedback! Such generosity and genuineness! Dear Vijay, I highly value your great support and I am deeply grateful.. thank you so much for always giving me the honour of reading and commenting on my humble work. My deepest regards and blessings.