I Only Wish {anaphora}

where would this world be if we didn't have wishes. this was a great piece of poetry.

This poem speaks for so many of us. We all have the same wishes, I believe. Thank you so much for commenting on my poems, you are kind. The one called "Smoke" called to me today, since we too live in the Northern Sacramento Valley, caught in between the Paradise fires, and the Trinity fires. Smoke has been a part of our lives all summer, but we are the fortunate ones, compared to those who have lost so much. Thank you for your nice words. Your friend, Carrie

I like the way the ending phrases link together and make a fine inner poem of three stanzas John.Nice work and sentiments.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observations

All those things you wish for, I am wishing for you, too. A beautiful reflection of your shining soul. Love, Shar

wishing to be,is our personal challenge to become in this life...nice MJ...and if i might,bring the two words,"some how" together, as "somehow" avoiding a break,and reference to "some others ",whereas it's about you "somehow".....regardless,keep it real brudda...peace , jay

Wishes do come true my friend, it's a matter of believing and making them happen just as your are doing in your life now. I respect you so much for what you told me and the man that you are now. Excellent poetry, it's filled with the author. Michael