I O U


I’m forever in your debt, m’lady
This me confess openly:
I offer U 
every pulmonary part
of this obsidian heart

O beautiful Ivory mare,
I love when you graze upon me
with those pretty olive eyes
As your bright yellow ponytail hair
shimmers in the vale breeze

I confess willingly,
I’m in your debt eternally, m’lady love
Your brave maiden rescue — 
Galloping deliverance 
from a brokenheart solitude
It t’was celestial revival approved

For this saving grace,
‘I do’ offer you
every pulsating part
of my obsidian heart

I owe you
every aorta praise prairie thing
That a lonesome Appaloosa can steppe sing
M’lady, let me kiss your 
heroine horseshoe 

O beautiful filly, Ivory!
I just want to thank you on bending knee 
For listening bosom intently
to my verdant vow, passionate plea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Foster Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 6:28 PM
This was simply lovely. Magical words, a command of romance... Ann
Kinard Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Freddie you have a romantic soul. even if it is for a horse.
Y. Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 2:38 PM
WoW! Freddie, You sure know how to write "romantic" poems. It was sooo good that I didn't want the " ooh la la" to end. Well done my dear friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Every pulmonary part of my bloody Jewish heart enjoyed this Romanticism, Freddie! Merry merriment, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Sweetly done! " let me kiss your heroine horseshoe "
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 4:56 AM
So unique is your rendition of a beautiful soul acknowledging a deep feeling of gratitude and debt to a human soul the heart rises in love with! So wonderful and sweet to read your poetry, Freddie! My deepest regards and blessings.
Na Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 4:33 PM
I like the romance that flows. Well done. Thanks for sharing Freddie
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Very romantic lines Freddie, well written. Tom
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace