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I Never Give Up

Looking where im at now I sit back and think how I remember I was a sun in december Before I knew It I slowed to an ember I let the coldness envelope my being I lost my eyesight I was prevented from seeing I gave low lifes the best of me And my habits the rest of me I've sunk to the lowest low And to this day I have nothing to show Even if everyone where to split My motto is I never quit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/5/2015 2:21:00 AM
- A goal in itself ...... never give up - Well written, Eric - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eric Oakley
Date: 11/11/2015 9:02:00 AM
Thank you :)

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