I Need Your Help

I am alone I am on my own I  have no home
I sit here everyday cold and in fear why don't you see
It's because of your greed and all of your wealth
I am soaked in the rain frozen I feel pain
In my core in my brain on my skin the freezing pain
It drives me insane why don't they hear when I tell them my fear
It's clear to see it's all around me
My fear is that I won't see it through to another year
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 23, 2012 at 7:16 AM
I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Patrick. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol
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March 19, 2012 at 4:45 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Patrick. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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March 17, 2012 at 10:04 AM
I hear you ,thank you for sharing. I have no words of comfort, but to say your writing touches the heart. keep pen in hand, and know for what it is worth you are not alone.
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March 17, 2012 at 9:03 AM
Hello....Touching written poem Patrick.- Have a lovely weekend with sunshine!!! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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