Get Your Premium Membership

I Need You

Black grief, I need you,
fill my mouth with laughter, my
tongue with shouts of joy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 7/4/2015 11:32:00 PM
David, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2015 9:56:00 PM
Hi DAVID.. Congrats on having your excellent write featured on the Soup's home page. I truly enjoyed the read! Blessings, LM
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2015 2:58:00 PM
David, this is an excellent Haiku. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2014 7:53:00 PM
Hope your tongue is filled with crystals of sugar ..and your mouth with cheerful songs. the wrinkle of yyouur smile/lifts the curving of your lips/Cheerful joy : )
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2014 12:12:00 AM
Ok, I am back where I left off with your poetry! WElcome to Soup! I enjoy reading short poems! I would never have seen that comment you replied to me if I had not come back here by mistake. A lot of poets do not see the replies, just to let you know. We have our notifications turned off. Anyway, just something I tell new poets! Have a good day!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/22/2014 11:58:00 AM
Nicely done on this poem and I like your explanation to my friend Andrea. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 10/21/2014 7:02:00 PM
I like your message, but I don't understand why you need black grief. Love the line: fill my mouth with laughter!!
Login to Reply
Meade Avatar
David Meade
Date: 10/21/2014 7:40:00 PM
Thank-you for your comment and question. The "black grief" is the state of the person who is calling out to his love -- for new hope, a new beginning -- to get past the grief, the darkness of these emotions -- to laughter, joy . . . completeness. Grief is not a prerequisite -- the poem describes the journey. All the best.
Date: 10/21/2014 12:18:00 PM
Excellent haiku with a clever twist! Pandita
Login to Reply
Meade Avatar
David Meade
Date: 10/21/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thank-you!