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I Need You

Through wind and rain Through any pain Your always there You always care When my words are vile When I'm in denial Your always there You always care When I throw myself down You lift me from the ground Your voice is the sound That keeps me around Without you I'm lost I can't be found But now you've left You've slipped away What more could I say to make you stay I need you to be here To know I'm okay Some times it's only your words That get me threw the grey. So here I'll lay until that day I find you again I'll bear the wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/15/2013 12:36:00 PM
Well-expressed universal sentiments of the human condition. Again, I am wondering if "threw" was your intended spelling. I ask because it lends a different feeling and I am curious, if intentional, why you chose that word (not that it detracts from the poem at all). :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:37:00 PM
Hi Kalee, sad when we depend on others. I once had this love for my x-.. when he was not around, I felt as if I was unmovable.... I hope this wind finds you again... smiles from me to you... xox..Linda
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