"i Need You"
I cant make things go my way
not even the way you love me
theres no way to enter
through your doors because
it has a sign on it saying
shall not "received"
trying to open
these black doors that
has no nob
or windows
please take
me show me what
i been fussing
about bring
your
caring,good feeling
and loving
back brace me
with surrounding
and lots of
time spend
with you
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