I Need You

As I sit here I choke back my tears
        cause I need to know you care
      I'm hanging onto the ropes of hope
        but I need your love to help me cope
      I'm so far away from everything I know is true
        yet my memories of you keeps me doing what I have to do
      Things are so complicated
        and sometimes I get so frustrated
      But I know as long as I have you by my side
        that I won't have to run or hide
      And I can face anything that comes my way
        now you see I know I need you more everyday
      Without you my life would be dark and gray
        so baby don't go away and leave me astray
      To you it might have seemed like a one time thing
        but for me you are more then just a fling
      You stole my heart 
         So please dont brake it apart
       Just tell me that you can feel this love that I know is true
          cause without you in my life I would feel so blue
        Baby I Need YOU!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 16, 2008 at 2:36 PM
I like how the title flows throughout the poem. I also like the ending line and the circular effect the ending gives when linking back with the title. Your technique is excellent. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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