Get Your Premium Membership

I Need You

As I sit here I choke back my tears cause I need to know you care I'm hanging onto the ropes of hope but I need your love to help me cope I'm so far away from everything I know is true yet my memories of you keeps me doing what I have to do Things are so complicated and sometimes I get so frustrated But I know as long as I have you by my side that I won't have to run or hide And I can face anything that comes my way now you see I know I need you more everyday Without you my life would be dark and gray so baby don't go away and leave me astray To you it might have seemed like a one time thing but for me you are more then just a fling You stole my heart So please dont brake it apart Just tell me that you can feel this love that I know is true cause without you in my life I would feel so blue Baby I Need YOU!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/16/2008 2:36:00 PM
I like how the title flows throughout the poem. I also like the ending line and the circular effect the ending gives when linking back with the title. Your technique is excellent. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry