I Need To Walk Around This Place

I need to walk I need to stroll I need to explore these ancient paths
That fills this landscape showing the way for timeless travel
To reach destinations deep inside the forest or on a Maypole green
Or to reach the sea or mountain high so much for one to marvel

I do it for I love this land its hedges brooks animals and flowers
I grew up here always drawn to the beauty and simplicity of its being
Then the concrete jungles came filled with a different feeling called fear
I want none of this I don’t need these eyes sad at what their seeing

Apparently it’s called creation it took 6 days to create one day to rest
Why not take the rest day put a wall around creation beauty contained
Anybody on the outside could have a featureless landscape to build up
Towards a sky where apparently the god’s live contemplating our pain

Leave us alone with what’s left of paradise let us smell the flowers
There’s so many of you and so few of us we won’t be much trouble
But after a while you’ll tire of us and want taller and taller temples
And finally this spaceship called earth will finally burst its bubble
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 3, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Stewart. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 3, 2010 at 1:11 PM
i like poetry that brings me above the written word, to where i enjoy the most - above the garbage in life but along side thoughts and dreams where there is peace and reality for me - and you too. thank you, chuck
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May 3, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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May 3, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Stewart. Love,Carol
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January 2, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative view. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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January 1, 2010 at 6:21 PM
What a good write, deep thoughts! You know there's a contest about how to build a spaceship..this verse might fit the bill well! I don't like cities either! Give me a forest or a field or a mountain any day over "buildings!" Light & Love (OH welcome to the soup!)
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