Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

I Need Time To Heal

Tell me why, but tell me True-
Spare me the heartbreak of a Lie
I would lay forever in these meadows...
Forever, until I die!
To rid myself of all the Pain,
And the Sorrows of what I feel
To ease my Mind, my worried Brain
(Lord! The Cuts! I need to heal)

*Referring to my problems with "Borderline Personality Disorder"; many of us are "cutters"

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Karen Anglesey September 11, 2013 at 6:49 AM Your outstanding poem is on the 'Top 100 Recent' list...congrats. I chorus the comments of Catie Lindsey below. Best seller stuff :) Just That Archaic Poet September 11, 2013 at 9:28 AM Just totally stoked right now <3 <3 <3 :D

Christy Love September 2, 2013 at 11:03 PM Im feelin it. Yeah I feel your poem, Just That Archaic Poet September 5, 2013 at 9:06 AM It makes me happy to hear that, Christy; thank you for popping in and leaving encouraging feedback :)

Lori Hopkins August 24, 2013 at 9:16 PM sincere desolation beautiful in its write ~lori Just That Archaic Poet August 25, 2013 at 9:23 AM Thank you for the kind words, Lori :)

Allen Danie August 24, 2013 at 4:52 AM Absolutely nice.... :) A~D Just That Archaic Poet August 24, 2013 at 10:16 AM Your compliment is very much appreciated, Allen :)

Grace Faolian August 24, 2013 at 2:37 AM Absolutely lovely poem. It really captures the hopeless feeling many of us feel, and the longing to just feel alright again. Definitely faved :) Just That Archaic Poet August 24, 2013 at 10:18 AM I don't know why, but when someone says they have made me or one of my pieces a "favorite", I feel sheepish and...unworthy, I guess. It humbles me to my core and touches me deeply. Thank you, Grace; you've made my morning wonderful :)

Karen Anglesey August 23, 2013 at 3:57 PM Oh my..such eloquent words to describe a very upsetting challenge in life. I have a family member who I recently found out does this. My heart sinks. You are an absolutely brilliant writer :) Just That Archaic Poet August 23, 2013 at 5:19 PM I am much too humble to accept such an accolade, but it touches my heart to hear someone say that, and I cannot thank you enough. It's still something with which I still struggle, and probably always will. Thank you again for stopping by and leaving such thoughtful comments <3