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I Need Time to Heal

Tell me why, but tell me True- Spare me the heartbreak of a Lie I would lay forever in these meadows... Forever, until I die! To rid myself of all the Pain, And the Sorrows of what I feel To ease my Mind, my worried Brain (Lord! The Cuts! I need to heal) *Referring to my problems with "Borderline Personality Disorder"; many of us are "cutters"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/11/2013 6:49:00 AM
Your outstanding poem is on the 'Top 100 Recent' list...congrats. I chorus the comments of Catie Lindsey below. Best seller stuff :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:28:00 AM
Just totally stoked right now <3 <3 <3 :D
Date: 9/2/2013 11:03:00 PM
Im feelin it. Yeah I feel your poem,
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Date: 9/5/2013 9:06:00 AM
It makes me happy to hear that, Christy; thank you for popping in and leaving encouraging feedback :)
Date: 8/24/2013 9:16:00 PM
sincere desolation beautiful in its write ~lori
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Date: 8/25/2013 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Lori :)
Date: 8/24/2013 4:52:00 AM
Absolutely nice.... :) A~D
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Date: 8/24/2013 10:16:00 AM
Your compliment is very much appreciated, Allen :)
Date: 8/24/2013 2:37:00 AM
Absolutely lovely poem. It really captures the hopeless feeling many of us feel, and the longing to just feel alright again. Definitely faved :)
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Date: 8/24/2013 10:18:00 AM
I don't know why, but when someone says they have made me or one of my pieces a "favorite", I feel sheepish and...unworthy, I guess. It humbles me to my core and touches me deeply. Thank you, Grace; you've made my morning wonderful :)
Date: 8/23/2013 3:57:00 PM
Oh my..such eloquent words to describe a very upsetting challenge in life. I have a family member who I recently found out does this. My heart sinks. You are an absolutely brilliant writer :)
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Date: 8/23/2013 5:19:00 PM
I am much too humble to accept such an accolade, but it touches my heart to hear someone say that, and I cannot thank you enough. It's still something with which I still struggle, and probably always will. Thank you again for stopping by and leaving such thoughtful comments <3