I Miss You Too

I MISS YOU TOO..

My dearest friend,
I don’t know where to start
But whatever I write,
Is straight from my heart

I remember those days.
I remember them ‘cause,
When we ran down the halls,
We didn’t know where to pause.

You were with me,
All this while,
Until she came by,
And erased my smile.

She was your friend,
And so was I,
But why was I drawn,
Apart from you, a mile.

First you were mine,
Now she is your honor.
When I’m alone crying,
While I’m stuck in the corner.

I know you are my best friend,
You still are the old you.
Somewhere deep down,
I know this for true.

I’ll try to find,
To bring you out.
Will never give up on you.
Cuz I know you miss me…….
And ……. I miss you too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Preety, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 6:39 PM
PREETY, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
Deshpande Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 10:25 AM
Lovely poem
Brown Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 9:21 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Preety. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 2:35 PM
Lovely passionate expressions on the feelings of love, preety
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