I Miss You So Much

I have never felt so ecstatic anymore like your touch
On my back I laid, looking into the fading light of the moon
The melody from the creaking sound of the wooden bench
Mixed with the feeble sound of my mourn

The skies are blue and beautiful
But my eyes are reddish and tearful

To the moon my eyes glues
It is the exact place and time we always lies
It feels like yesterday, time really flies

So sad you left without leaving me a note
for only that we could vote

My hands always yearns for your gentle curves
And my eyes longed to fall on your gentle moves

My lips mimics the song we use to sing
But my mind has been casted afar from that ring

I search everywhere, even the jungle
With no living soul for me to mingle

Even though I was laying on the bench
My heart travels the world, doing the search

To the moon I asked, "when you will be back?"
And what great tides will bring such a luck?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/3/2016 10:02:00 AM
Oh I can feel the sadness in this one. Well written.!
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Abdul Rashid Mohammed
Date: 11/4/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Heidi. will always do my best.
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