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I MISS YOU GRANNY

The distant night stars Spread out like the fireflies Granny watches me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/27/2013 6:59:00 AM
Great work..I can see the scene of a lonely girl looking up at the stars..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, on some poems when I go back I remember the emotion, the scene, or deep inner goings on when I wrote them..Sara
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Sara for reading my poem..much love,Watisungla :)
Date: 4/25/2013 5:59:00 PM
this is just wonderful!!
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)
Date: 11/16/2012 4:39:00 AM
looking down,looking out for her sweet grand daughter,granny has become your angel,wonderful write Watisungla
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Date: 11/16/2012 4:41:00 AM
Thanks Richard for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)
Date: 11/13/2012 2:35:00 AM
Yes, she do....always, Watisungla. - Very well written haiku - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2012 4:39:00 AM
Thanks Anne for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)