I Miss You Granny

The distant night stars
Spread out like the fireflies
Granny watches me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 6:59 AM
Great work..I can see the scene of a lonely girl looking up at the stars..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, on some poems when I go back I remember the emotion, the scene, or deep inner goings on when I wrote them..Sara
Ao Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Sara for reading my poem..much love,Watisungla :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 5:59 PM
this is just wonderful!!
Ao Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Thank you Andrea for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)
Palmer Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 4:39 AM
looking down,looking out for her sweet grand daughter,granny has become your angel,wonderful write Watisungla
Ao Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Thanks Richard for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 2:35 AM
Yes, she do....always, Watisungla. - Very well written haiku - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ao Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 4:39 AM
Thanks Anne for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)
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